Story idea alert: The Caelin series?

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An 18-year-old girl, a member of a race of people known as the Captives who are born and die in camps all over the world, escapes from a death camp in the distant future after her friend is murdered. She travels the countryside seeking another race of people, The Free Ones, while trying to avoid the Government of yet another race of people, the Rulers. One of the Rulers helps her. Will she overthrow the Government? And is she the promised one the Free Ones are seeking to lead them? Will the dissenting Rulers turn her in to cause the Government to go back into its stupor while they overthrow it? Read "The Caelin series" to find out!

Lots of Love,

Rachel

Freedom from Debt

Deuteronomy 28 lists curses that happen if you do not obey the commands of God (basically the 10 Commandments) and blessings if you do. Remember how Jesus said, "The commandments can be summed up in 2 commands: Love the Lord your God and love your neighbor." Jesus revolutionized us. That is why we are under a curse in America. We aren't loving God or our neighbors. If we do, we will be free! We need to start loving people again. I for one am planning on doing that. He does not want us to live in poverty - God wants to bless us but cannot.

Lots of Love,

Rachel